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Elizabell and her BRILLIANT cousin Isabella went to a oversized water park in Brazil, They prefered to go there because it was their vacation and also that was their last day there. Elizabell also wanted to get over her frightening fear on their Gigantic Jumbo Slide.
As Elizabell got on the slide, she has a million butterflies in her stomach because she was so afraid and was panicking but still managed to just do it. When Elizabell went down the slide, she screamed as loud as the Big Ben clock chiming every hour on the hour riding the enormous almighty slide. Her voice echoed on the horrifying slide and she felt like she was collapsing down a thundering cliff. Her heart started beating extremely quick and it was really difficult for her to breath then they got to the bottom of the petrified slide.
Elizabell was so relieved that she made it through the pitch black slide and said she will NEVER go on there EVER Again!
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