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Monday 8 August 2016

CHOCOLATE - Akanesi

CHOCOLATE!

In my Opinion, Chocolate is Delicious because Chocolate taste Delightful and Yummy! For Example, When i’m angry or Heartbroken I eat chocolate because it makes me feel alot better! That’s why I absolutely believe Chocolate is SPECTACULAR!!
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4 comments:

  1. Anonymous8 August 2016 at 14:25

    that is a beautiful work and you should keep it up

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  2. Anonymous8 August 2016 at 14:27

    you should keep it up with you work good job

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  3. Anonymous8 August 2016 at 14:27

    that is a beautiful work and you should keep it up

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  4. Anonymous12 August 2016 at 12:23

    Hi Akanesi,
    I really liked the way you used the oreo structure for your persuasive writing. I also like the way you used superlative language in your story. I think you could improve by re - reading your sentences to make sure it makes sense.

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